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Chapter Twenty Six
A Golden State
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TThe RV acted as a moving island in the swirling river of night
time traffic as it made its way down the freeway and into the Greater Los Angeles area.
Adam, currently at the wheel, followed Sue's occasional directions as they headed towards
the coast.
"Are you sure you want to head straight to the Airport?" Sue asked again,
"I have plenty of room for everyone. It is a big house, with three empty guest
rooms."
"Yes, Sue. Trust me, the quicker Sally and I can get to the Tribunal, the quicker we
can get this whole situation resolved. And Cassandra is really looking forward to catching
up with Duncan."
Yeah, but can we even make it to the Airport in this thing in time to get you three on the
11:30 flight?" Sue asked, looking out her side window and catching a glimpse of her
Geo bouncing along behind on it's trailer.
If you can get me to the airport, we should be fine." Adam replied, changing lanes to
pass a slowly moving truck, one which apparently actually believed in the 55 mph speed
limit advertised by the white signs every few miles along the road.
Once past the truck, Adam returned himself to the second lane in, where his relatively
slow 60 mph progress wouldn't impede the faster cars constantly whizzing by on the left,
and occasionally on the right as well. The slower moving truck dwindled in the rear and
was replaced by a blue Cooper, which came up behind the Geo on it's trailer and decided to
honk at it.
Cassandra hung up Adam's phone, and came up to hang between the front seats as she told
Adam, "ok, we've got tickets. The last two in First Class, and one for myself in
coach."
"Alliance?" asked Adam.
"Yes. 11:10pm departure, gate 12. Currently still onetime."
"Good, I like their beers." Adam replied.
"Take the 110 up here," Sue advised, "West."
Adam followed her directions, then asked, "You said Sally and I are up in front, with
you in coach, why?"
"Couple of reasons, first, with that bump on her head this afternoon, she really
shouldn't be left alone. Second, with the two of you together, you can get started on
strategizing how you're going to get Sue's neck here off the chopping block, so to
speak."
Sue looked over her shoulder and saw Adam nodding. "Yes, that is a good idea."
Sue felt a flush of emotions as she noted the protective expression on Adam's face.
Once Adam was on-track for the airport, Sue got up and made her way to the back of the RV.
Sally was sitting at the dinette, facing forward, holding the side of her head.
"Vampires. Who woulda thought thea were nae jus' fiction?"
"I wouldn't of thought them possible if I hadn't seen them go 'poof' myseelf when
they lost their heads." Sue replied, "Speaking of which, how's yours?"
"I took some Aspirin, and drank that infernal Rescue Remedy you gave me. The pain is
fading." Sally answered with a slight move of her shoulders that was more wince than
shrug. "I didn't get a chance to say it before, but I am really glad you four were
there. An' that you took care of them."
"Four?", Sue asked.
"I'm a watcher, lass. I may not of picked up on it right away, but I know why ye
resigned. An' I have my suspicions 'bout Adam. I think he's older than he looks, a lot
older. But that isn't any o' my problem. My job is ta watch my 'mmortal, an' keep her
chronicle. I hope I can revise it a bit before I die though. Let Adam know that in a few
years, in case I don't get a chance to. For now, as you yanks say, I'll let sleeping dogs
lie," she finished with a sideways glance at the coyote laying on the floor in front
of the door well.
"I don't know what to say," Sue said, a flush rising to her face.
"Don't say a thing, because the less you say, the less I have ta pretend not ta hear.
I just wanted you ta know, is all."
Sue couldn't respond to that verbally, so she did the only thing she could, and gave the
redhead a solid hug. "I hope you come sometime and visit me." She said, letting
go.
"Probably. An' probably wi' Cassandra, if I know my 'mmortal." Sally responded
with a grin.
As they approached the airport, Adam worried a bit about getting
such a large vehicle in, especially with the car on it's trailer banging along behind.
"I don't think there are any restrictions, Adam. The only problem I see is parking,
but if we just pull up and everyone gets out, Patrick can take the wheel and orbit while
you get checked in. I can go in with you, just to make sure you get through security all
right, and then I'll go back out, and wave Patrick down the next time he comes by."
Plan decided upon, Adam deftly maneuvered the RV through the airport traffic, until he got
to terminal seven. He then slid over to the right, and double parked beside a row of cars
disgorging passengers. Leaving the engine running, he slid from behind the wheel, and
moved over to let Patrick take his place.
Cassandra and Sue had moved Sally's, Adam's, and Cassandra's bags into the kitchen, and
placed them on the floor. Cassandra had taken special care to pack her sword, and unseen
by Sally, Adam's much larger bastard sword into the golf bag she normally used to check
her weapon. Adam looked at his coat worriedly for a moment, before Cassandra lifted it off
the bed and tossed it forward to him, saying, "See me in Seacouver."
Adam nodded, then bent to pick up the golf bag. "This is heavy", he said,
lifting the load.
"Yeah, but it works. I keep a case in there for the swords, of which I normally carry
three, my regular one and two spares, just in case," She explained.
Adam nodded, and slinging the bag over one shoulder awkwardly, bent to lift his own
duffel, which was lighter than usual when he was at an airport. He nodded, and said
simply, "Thanks."
Sue had already opened the door and was lifting out Sally's case and heading for the
terminal as a traffic officer started strolling over. "You'll have to move that
thing, it's blocking access to the loading zone," He called.
Sue stopped, and turned to look at the RV behind her. Adam had already exited, as had
Cassandra. Sally was the last one out, and she gently closed the door of the RV, as the
coyote looked out after them, his tail wagging like he thought he was a dog.
"It'll be gone in a moment, just dropping some folks off. I hope it's ok if it stops
in a while to pick me back up, I promise it won't take but a moment for me to get
inside."
The officer shook his head and replied, "Double parking like that is illegal here,
Miss. But considering that it would take five or six car lengths to park it legally, I'll
let it slide this time. But you really shouldn't use an RV to drop off passengers, and you
aren't supposed to board vehicles on this level at all. Next time, use a car, drop
everyone off up here, and have them go downstairs to pick you back up, if you have to go
in for some reason. You know you can't go to the departure gates any more, right?"
Sue nodded, and said, "I just want to make sure they get through security in time to
make their flight, then I am heading home. We just returned from a long trip, and time is
tight."
The officer grinned, and replied, "Then you'd better get moving, hadn't you?"
Sue turned, and saw that Sally, Cassandra, and Adam were all waiting for her in front of
the doors into the terminal. With a grin, she answered the officer, "I suppose so.
Thanks for making an exception for me. I promise we won't get in your hair again."
With that she turned to the terminal and followed the three travelers inside.
Cassandra made her way straight to the First Class check-in counter, waving for Sally,
Adam, and Sue to follow her.
"Hello. Thanks for flying Alliance Airlines. Where are you four traveling this
evening?" the girl at the counter asked with a plastic smile.
Cassandra returned a natural smile for it's forced counterpart, and replied, "Just
three of us, actually, and Seacouver. Hopefully it won't be a problem, but only two of the
tickets are really in First Class, but all three are in my name."
The airline employee's plastic smile slipped a bit at that, "I'm sorry Mam, but this
counter is only for first class check-ins. Your other person will have to wait in that
line over there," she said, pointing at the long line waiting for the other three
attendants.
Cassandra looked at her, and asked, "I see. Will they be able to check in without
me?"
The attendant shook her head, her smile back to it's sterile artificiality, "I'm
afraid not, but I will have you checked in long before they can get to the front of the
line."
Cassandra looked back at the line then asked, "And if I wait in that line, what are
the odds of my making it on the Seacouver flight this evening?"
The attendant punched some keys on her computer, then looked back up, "I'm afraid not
good, since once you get checked in, you still have to go through security, and that can
take over half an hour, even at this time of night. Your flight boards in twenty minutes,
and leaves in forty five."
Cassandra nodded her head. "Just to make sure, before I call my travel agent and
raise a stink, Charles Waterman is still the CEO of Alliance?"
The plastic smile slipped again, as the woman nodded.
"Then you had better hope I can make it through that line and catch my flight after I
check my two first class passengers here in, hadn't you Ms. Cunningham?" Cassandra
said coldly, her own smile as extinct as the dinosaurs.
"Are you threatening me, Miss?" the attendant asked, her plastic smile vanishing
and being replaced by an entirely neutral expression which looked every bit as false as
the smile it had just replaced.
"No, I am not threatening a thing. But Charlie will hear from me if I miss my flight,
of that you can be certain," Cassandra replied. "Especially if I miss it because
one of his clerks was not doing her job."
The attendant just looked back coldly and replied, "I see. Well, I think I have had
enough attitude from you, Miss. I am taking my break now." The plastic smile
returned, as she added, "Have a nice evening. I think there is another flight to
Seacouver leaving at 6 tomorrow morning, if it's not full."
Cassandra nodded, then made her way to the rear of the regular check in line, as the woman
closed the First Class window and made her way through a door in the back of the counter
area an disappeared. Sue watched as Cassandra calmly pulled out her cell phone, and placed
a call.
"Hello, Samantha? Yes, It's me, Cassandra. No, I'm at the airport. Yes, I know what
time it is. No, that's why I'm calling. Is Charlie there? Thanks. Hi Charlie. Good to hear
from you as well. Sorry to disturb your breakfast. Yes, I'm sorry my call this morning to
Samantha woke you up. No, that's part of why I called. What? No, I'm at LAX. Well, there
are only three windows open. Yes, I know what time it is, but I am sure you have at least
eight or nine people back there from what I could hear. No, I'm not sure, but I do know
that if I don't get checked in right now I and my party will miss the flight. No, I don't
want you to hold the flight, I know how much of a hassle that is. What then, I would like
you to light a fire under your people's behinds. Especially one Miss Wanda Cunningham. No,
Cunning, as in smart, but in her case, the ham must of canceled it. Yes. She was the
attendant at the first class window, who decided to take a break instead of check me in
after telling me I would have to miss my flight. That would be so kind. Thanks,
Charles."
The smile was back as Cassandra hung up the phone. Sue looked at her and asked, "Did
you just call the CEO of the airline, and ask him to chew out that bitch?"
Cassandra's grin widened, and she replied, "His wife is a friend of mine, and has
been my travel agent since before they were married. She still books all my flights and
most of my hotels. She was the one I called this morning, and I specifically asked her not
to bump anyone from First Class just for me. She would have though. Charlie just offered
to hold the whole plane for me. Such a sweet man."
Abut that time, attendants began to come pouring out of the back room, opening windows up
and down the counter, until all but the First Class window was open. As the line started
moving at a reasonable pace, Cassandra looked for a specific face, but failed to find it.
A few moments later, some older gentleman's head poked out, and he scanned the waiting
line of people. Spotting Cassandra and her group at the end of the regular check in line,
his head disappeared back through the door like a groundhog through his hole. He
re-emerged several moments later, escorting Ms. Cunningham around from behind the counter,
and past the waiting people to Cassandra and her waiting group.
"Mrs. Woods?" he asked, plaintively.
As Cassandra nodded, Ms. Cunningham's face went three shades paler, until it looked more
appropriate for a corpse, or considering the painted appearance of her lips and eyes,
perhaps a manikin.
"I'm George Hemming, third shift manager. We just got a conference call from the vice
president of operations, and Mr. Waterman, our CEO. They were both quite imperative that
you and your party make the eleven-ten flight to Seacouver." The gentleman explained.
Cassandra looked at him and nodded her head. "Yes?" she asked.
"Well, if you and your party would accompany me back to the First Class window, I'll
check you in, and then escort you through security to the gate. For some reason Mr.
Waterman was quite insistent that we don't have to hold the plane. He said that if you
didn't make it for an on-time departure, that the explanation I am going to have to give
on man-hour allocation and customer satisfaction would be the least of my concerns. While
I am not exactly sure what that meant, I am rather certain that it is something I would
rather avoid," the man replied, gesturing towards the vacant window.
Cassandra looked at him, then shook her head sadly, "I'm afraid that the woman
working that window told me I had to wait in the regular line. I would hate to disobey an
airline employee, and I am afraid I simply can't bring myself to skip ahead of all these
other people unfairly, nor will I be willing to bypass the line for security. If your
operation is being run so inefficiently that it takes more than an hour to get from the
terminal door to the departure gate, then that is something that Charlie needs to know. If
he doesn't, then he is doing a disservice to all his customers. They shouldn't have to
come to the airport three hours before their flight just to wait in lines."
Mr. Hemming looked at his watch, then back at the line of customers still waiting in front
of Cassandra, then over at the Security line as well. "I'm afraid I can't do much
about the delay caused by the TSA. I can backdoor VIPs to bypass the line, but I can't
make them move any faster than they do, they are a government agency, after all."
Cassandra nodded her head, and agreed, "Very well. I'll let you 'backdoor' me as you
put it, but I will wait here like all the other passengers. Some of them might also be
planning on taking that flight to Seacouver. I really would suggest you open the First
Class window to general passengers, and try to clear out your backlog as fast as possible,
then once that is done, your people can resume taking their breaks, but it would be a good
idea for them to refrain from doing it all at once. I am afraid that after my phone call
this evening, that Charlie will probably be taking a closer look at the way things are run
here."
Mr. Hemming again looked at his watch, then headed back towards the First Class window,
Ms. Cunningham following meekly in his wake. Once back behind the counter, he set Ms.
Cunningham back to work at her own window, and proceeded to make his way up and down the
line of attendants, swooping in to speed things along wherever they looked to be bogging
down, and occasionally glancing at his watch.
It was only another fifteen minutes, twenty minutes before departure time, when Cassandra
finally made it to the front of the line. Hemming, seeing her position, made his way to
the attendant who was just finishing up a check-in, and waved her over personally, again
glancing worriedly at his watch to check the time.
"Welcome to Alliance Airlines" the harried young man at the counter said as she
approached, throwing a worried glance over his shoulder at the manager hovering behind
him. "Where are you traveling this evening?"
Cassandra replied, "Seacouver. Three tickets, all in my name."
The young man's glance took in Sue, Adam, Sally, and Cassandra, and he asked, "Will
there be four passengers? I think that flight is sold out."
Cassandra smiled back at him and replied, "No, just the three. Sue is just here to
make sure we get off ok. She was worried about the time."
At that, Mr. Hemming flushed and looked at his watch again worriedly.
The young man proceeded to check Cassandra, Adam, and Sally in, and issued them boarding
passes. As he took their bags, he commented, "I don't know if these will make it on
the flight. Guaranteed baggage cutoff is thirty minutes before boarding, and that was over
forty minutes ago.
Hemming broke in saying, "Don't worry Ms. Woods, they'll make it. I'll walk them over
myself. I will personally guarantee that your bags will be on your flight."
Cassandra nodded at that, and taking her boarding pass, turned away to get in the line for
Security.
Mr. Hemming ran around the counter and caught up with her before she had made it even a
quarter of the way. "Here, let me walk you up to the checkpoint and ask them to
backdoor you through."
Cassandra looked at her own watch, then at the line of people snaking out into the
terminal, and finally acquiesced. "Ok. This one time." Looking over at Adam and
Sally, she said, "Lets go people, we've got a plane to catch."
A look of relief spread across Hemming's face as he lead them past the waiting line of
passengers and took them strait to an unoccupied security station. He waved at one of the
TSA men who set down his coffee and came over, "Yeah, George?" the man asked.
"Sal, could you run these folks through VIP? They are trying to catch the eleven-ten
to Seacouver," Hemming explained.
The TSA man looked at his own watch, then at the group of passengers, then at Hemming's
desperate face. Seeing something there decided him, and he nodded. "Right this way
folks," he said, gesturing towards another station.
Sue gave Sally, then Adam, then finally Cassandra a hug, then stood there watching them
pass one at a time through the scanner.
She turned away from the security station for a moment and saw Hemming rushing back to the
counter, probably to "personally" carry their bags to the plane. Somehow, she
knew that he'd get them there. Not that it would do all that much damage control for his
job. But it might be enough to save it. Depending on that manpower presentation he gave.
Sue waved again as Adam, Cassandra, and Sally headed away from the security checkpoint
towards their gate, vanishing into the crowd beyond.
With a sigh, she turned away, and started to make her way past the ticket counters towards
the entrance, so she could catch Patrick as he made his next pass through the airport.
It had been an exhausting day, with the pre-dawn start for the ceremony, through the long
drive the rest of the way here to L.A., including the brief fight with the Vampires in
Sunnydale.
She was looking forward to getting back to her house, and finally getting settled down in
her own bed, and getting some much needed sleep.
Tomorrow would be soon enough to start worrying about what to do about the watchers, and
Patrick, and that coyote which seemed to have adopted them.
As she was walking past the ticket counter, she felt the brush of another Quickening
across her mind.
Looking around, she tried to spot the Immortal, hopefully before he spotted her.
Not seeing anyone looking, she tried to use one of Cassandra's tricks, closing her eyes
and focusing on the feel of the Quickening, to identify the direction, and possibly
distance it was from her.
She felt an odd twisting, apparently as it moved, and she was pretty sure it was getting
stronger as well. Somewhere to her left, towards the doors. If she turned around, and
headed back towards the security booths, she should be fine. She was feeling naked without
her coat, and it's concealed katana. The plastic bowie knife under her blouse seemed
little consolation.
It was definitely moving, and moving towards her. If the other Immortal hadn't sensed her
yet, she was sure they would soon.
Opening her eyes, she started to turn away, when she spotted an older looking gentleman,
his hair a stark white, yet his face relatively unlined, suddenly stop in his tracks and
start looking around.
The man seemed to spot her immediately, and his face light with recognition. Sue however
was sure she had never seen the man before in her life.
He waved at her and called out, "Julie!"
Sue hoped he was waving at someone behind her, as she turned and made her way back up the
walk, towards the checkpoint and the stairs. She thought if she passed the checkpoint she
might be able to get out on the other side of the terminal. It was either that or face
some unknown Immortal.
Just as she was passing the checkpoint, preparing to dive into the crowd on the other
side, a hand settled roughly on her shoulder. "Janet, stop," a harsh voice
hissed, with a faint German accent.
The hand spun her around, to face the white haired man, a harsh expression now darkening
his face. "You have changed, come into your legacy, I can feel it. You must come with
me, and tell me how this happened."
Sue tried to wiggle free, the pain from her shoulder making her wince in agony. "Let
me go, whoever you are. I don't want to fight you, especially not here."
The man laughed almost contemptuously as he replied, "Fight me, child, you couldn't
fight a jewden. What makes you think you could ever fight me! You should know better. What
ever tricks you may think you have learned in the last year, they are nothing to what I
know. You would lose your pretty head in an instant, and that would be a waste,
considering how much time and effort I put into creating it."
Sue pulled away from him again, finally breaking his grasp, and taking several steps back.
"I don't know you, I've never seen you before in my life, and I have no idea what you
are talking about. Just leave me alone. I just want to go home."
"Very well, Julie. We will go home. I still have your room for you, ya? You will not
argue with me or make a scene, and we will go home now?"
Sue felt her heart skip a beat. Whoever this man was, he thought he knew her, and wanted
to take her to his house. Apparently he expected her to meekly follow along, wherever he
led. "Uh, no, I won't make a scene. I just want to go, ok?"
He nodded gravely, then replied, "Very well, you will walk in front. Slowly, back the
way we came. We will go out side, and Buck will take us home, ok? I will get Myra's
tickets later."
"Um, ok. I'll walk outside with you." Sue agreed, her eyes darting around. She
could try to get the attention of the security guys, but considering the metal-detector
proof knife she had strapped to her back, official intervention in a security conscious
airport didn't seem the best idea at the moment. She would just have to play along, and
see what happened.
"Go ahead, Julie. You remember Buck's car, yes?" the man said, roughly shoving
her back, his hand almost brushing against the bowie's halter.
Sue started walking back the way she had come, keeping her eyes open for anything she
could use to her advantage. Hoping against hope for a large luggage cart, or some other
type of obstacle she could use to put some distance, and possibly confusion between
herself and the mad man behind her so she could escape.
Before she knew it, the doors were coming up, and she was nudged outside by a hand on her
shoulder.
She looked up and down the line of parked cars, hoping against hope to see the RV there,
or even the friendly traffic cop, but there was nothing. Then she spotted it, moving in
from the Loop, and pulling up to a stop with it's side door almost opposite her, on the
other side of the line of waiting cars.
"Vhere eis he!" the man behind her hissed, "I tolt him to vait!"
Sue looked again, trying to find some way to distract him long enough for her to make the
dash the few feet to the RV. She was sure Patrick had felt the other Immortal's quickening
as he drove up, but she hadn't felt Patrick's, so she was equally sure the man behind her
hadn't either.
An idea sprung to the front of her mind, and she suddenly pointed towards the back of the
row of cars, as though spotting someone, "Isn't that him there? Perhaps the police
made him move." Stepping out between the pair of cars which were sandwiched between
the RV and the curb, as though to get a better, look, Sue pointed back and said,
"That looks like him, doesn't it?"
The man behind her turned to look for himself, unconcerned she may try to escape with her
path blocked securely by the cars to either side, and the white RV in front of her. As his
eyes followed her hand down the line of cars, she took the chance, and leapt for the door,
yanking on the latch, and dragging it open so hard the side banged into the back of the
car on her right.
Leaping through the door and slamming it closed behind her, she yelled, "Patrick, get
OUT of here!"
She was thrown against the side of the steps as Patrick hit the gas, the RV lurching
forward. Through the side window, she could see the man leaping after her, and heard him
bang off the rear of the RV as it pulled out into the airport traffic.
Sue climbed the steps, and made her way to the bedroom in the back, where she could see
the man climbing to his feet and gesturing frantically at the departing RV, then reaching
into his coat to pull out a cell phone and jab angrily at it's keys.
Sue lost sight of him as the RV swung on around the loop, heading towards the Aviation
exit, and the 405 beyond.
Turning back towards the front, she came up and flopped into the passenger seat across
from Patrick, taking an odd comfort from the bowie knife digging painfully into her back
as her heart slowed it's frantic pace.
By the time they had made it up Aviation to make their right turn to catch the South-bound
405 towards Torrance, she was almost entirely recovered. Softly she told Patrick that
Sally, Cassandra, and Adam were on their way on the flight to Seacouver, and how
Cassandra's call to her travel agent managed to get them through on time. Then she told
him about the encounter with the mad man in the terminal. "Thank god you showed up
when you did! I don't know what would of happened if it had been his friend out there
instead of you." Sue concluded.
"Heh, I was just orbiting like you told me, I saw you come out, and pulled in,
thinking the timing was perfect. First thing I knew there was a problem was when I felt
his Quickening as I was pulling up. I didn't think it was yours, or rather Eadgils's,
'cause it wasn't strong enough, and it was too strong for you, so I knew someone was
around. And I could see he was kind of watching you, so I thought something might be up. I
was trying to figure out if it would be better for me to get up and get out, or stay at
the wheel, when you banged the door and yelled at me to go."
Sue smiled at him, as they pulled onto the freeway, and headed towards the Crenshaw exit a
few miles away. "You did good, Patrick. Really good." She replied, proceeding to
give him directions to her childhood home.
Neither one noticed the small black BMW following a few cars behind, even as they exited
the freeway on Redondo, and headed towards the college, and Sue's house a few blocks
beyond.
They didn't notice as it drove slowly past the branch into the cul-de-sac on Delia,
stopping back on Cherry, where it still had a good view of the RV as it pulled to a stop
in front of the driveway at the end, before the two story brown house, with the back yard
fronting on the concrete riverbed. Sue's house, with the upstairs bedroom with it's sky
blue walls, covered with posters, and the large tree growing just outside it's window in
the back yard.
Neither of them noticed the bald headed young man talking excitedly into his cell phone as
they climbed out of the RV, and Sue used her keys to finally open the door to the place
she had been heading, ever since she first woke up after that rainy night in Georgia, a
scant week before.
And neither of then noticed as the driver got out, then used a small digital camera to
snap pictures illuminated only by the cloud hazed moon and the surrounding streetlights of
the RV where it was parked in front of the house, the Geo on it's trailer behind it, or
the two tired people making their way inside the darkened building. Neither one of them
noticed a thing.
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Act 2 Afterward
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Hello readers.
When I started this story, nine odd months ago, I had a simple plot in mind. To show what
happened when two distinct personalities got tossed into one head, and how the individual
to whom that happened came to cope and adjust to the situation.
The venue for that plot was to be my protagonist's journey home, which was to take several
weeks of time, and probably ten chapters of story. Yep, ten chapters. Something went very
wrong with my plans. I know right when the story diverged from my original concept. Sue,
or rather, Eadgils, was sitting in an Arby's, watching a rowdy bunch of kids at the
counter. Then Patrick came along.
Some people said I kept killing poor Patrick for way too long. Perhaps. But it was only
for four days. It just seems longer than that when you keep dying.
At this point, Sue has been Immortal for just a bit under a week. And I've passed the
110,000 word mark on the story. And those ten chapters? You just finished up chapter 26.
And some of those 26 chapters were big enough that they ought to count double. Three of
them, to be exact. So one could reasonably say I have gone three times as far as I had
intended. And still have at least as much story left to write as I had planned to write in
the first place. How so? By my current outline, the final special effects laden conclusion
to the story, which is already written, by the way, is numbered as 33. It is followed by
an epilogue, much as Chapter 1 was preceded by a prologue. I like logues apparently. In
any case, assuming I can stick to that, then I should have a story of about 150,000 words,
more or less. Certainly a good sized novel.
Plot wise, well, Sue has made it home already. Now what? Well, in the intervening months,
I learned that even as the writer of the story my characters can surprise me. Patrick came
entirely from left field. I had never intended for Sally to know about Sue being an
Immortal. When she told Sue she knew that last night in the RV, I was probably more
shocked than anyone. The guy in the airport was not as much of a surprise to me though. As
you will see in Act 3, the seeds for it were planted way back in Chapter 1. Yes, that long
ago. Granted, they took a long time to come to fruition, most villains make their
appearance before the last third of a story. But in this case, Sue was not around for him
to menace before now. Now that she finally is, he has a whole lot of catching up to do.
Thus we come to the subtitle for Act 3. While it's working title has varied, from "LA
Plot" to simply "Home", I think it's current incarnation, "Perils of
Sue" is most apt. For that will be what most of act 3 consists of. Perils, of one
sort or another, either from without, or from within, for Sue to survive or endure.
It will be a while before I can give it to you. I have yet to finish a single chapter,
other than the actual last one, of Act 3. By my best guess, it will be some time near
September, about one year from when I started this story, when it will be done. For now I
leave you with the consolation that Sue is finally at home. Asleep, in her own bed.
I leave you with the image of her sleeping peacefully, in an upstairs room with sky blue
walls, covered with boy-band posters from the 90's, along with various other posters and
pictures of interest to the teenaged Sue who so decorated them. The air in the room has a
slight damp fresh rain smell, and a faint sound of running water can barely be heard from
outside.
A large tree sits vigil outside her window, swaying gently in the night time breeze, as a
soft rain patters gently against the slightly open window. Rainwater rushes by in the
riverbed behind her house, disappearing down the channel under the Camino College parking
lot.
Patrick is asleep in one of the guest rooms somewhere, probably downstairs.
And in the living room, on the carpet before the fireplace, where a dimly glowing bed of
coals marks the remnants of a once roaring fire, the coyote keeps a silent watch, his
golden eyes seeming to glow in the near darkness. He knows what is coming. Ask the
Indians, they can tell you. Coyote knows the future, and if he offers you a warning, you
should follow it, or you will face the consequences. Coyote knows.
Dana Short, June 2004
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