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Act III
The Perils Of Sue
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The conclusion of the Meeting Of Minds story.
When I started this story, nine odd months ago, I had a simple plot in
mind. To show what happened when two distinct personalities got tossed into one head, and
how the individual to whom that happened came to cope and adjust to the situation.
The venue for that plot was to be my protagonist's journey home, which was to take several
weeks of time, and probably ten chapters of story. Yep, ten chapters. Something went very
wrong with my plans. I know right when the story diverged from my original concept. Sue,
or rather, Eadgils, was sitting in an Arby's, watching a rowdy bunch of kids at the
counter. Then Patrick came along.
Some people said I kept killing poor Patrick for way too long. Perhaps. But it was only
for four days. It just seems longer than that when you keep dying.
At this point, Sue has been Immortal for just a bit under a week. And I've passed the
110,000 word mark on the story. And those ten chapters? I just finished up chapter 26. And
some of those 26 chapters were big enough that they ought to count double. Three of them,
to be exact. So one could reasonably say I have gone three times as far as I had intended.
And still have at least as much story left to write as I had planned to write in the first
place. How so? By my current outline, the final special effects laden conclusion to the
story, which is already written by the way, is numbered as 33. It is followed by an
epilogue, much as Chapter 1 was preceded by a prologue. I like logues apparently. In any
case, assuming I can stick to that then I should have a story of about 150,000 words, more
or less. Certainly a good sized novel.
Plot wise, well, Sue has made it home already. Now what? Well, in the intervening months,
I learned that even as the writer of the story my characters can surprise me. Patrick came
entirely from left field. I had never intended for Sally to know about Sue being an
Immortal. When she told Sue she knew that last night in the RV, I was probably more
shocked than anyone. The guy in the airport was not as much of a suprise to me though. As
you will see in Act 3, the seeds for it were planted way back in Chapter 1. Yes, that long
ago. Granted, they took a long time to come to fruition, most villains make their
appearance before the last third of a story. But in this case, Sue was not around for him
to menace before now. Now that she finally is, he has a whole lot of catching up to do.
Thus we come to the subtitle for Act 3. While it's working title has varied from "LA
Plot" to simply "Home", I think it's current incarnation, "Perils of
Sue" is most apt. For that will be what most of Act 3 consists of. Perils, of one
sort or another, either from without, or from within, for Sue to survive or endure.
It will be a while before I can give it to you. I have yet to finish a single chapter,
other than the actual last one, of Act 3. By my best guess, it will be some time near
September, about one year from when I started this story, when it will be done.
For now I can only give you the consolation that Sue is finally at home. Asleep, in her
own bed.
So, I leave you with the image of her sleeping peacefully, in an upstairs room with sky
blue walls, covered with boy-band posters from the 90's, along with various other posters
and pictures of interest to the teenaged Sue who so decorated them. The air in the room
has a slightly damp fresh rain smell, and the faint sound of running water can barely be
heard from outside, along with the occasional distant whish of a cars tires on a wet
street.
A large tree sits vigil outside her window, swaying gently in the night time breeze, as a
soft rain patters gently against the slightly open window. Rainwater rushes by in the
riverbed behind her house, disappearing down the channel under the El Camino College
parking lot.
Patrick is asleep in one of the guest rooms somewhere, probably downstairs.
And in the living room, on the carpet before the fireplace, where a dimly glowing bed of
coals marks the remnants of a once roaring fire, the coyote keeps a silent watch, his
golden eyes seeming to glow in the near darkness. He knows what is coming. Ask the
Indians, they can tell you. Coyote knows the future, and if he offers you a warning, you
should follow it or you will face the consequences. Coyote knows.
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- Dana Short, June 2004
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Coming late Summer, or early Fall 2004
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